05-08-2013, 12:52 AM
(My first)...and now my first real edit based in suggestions. Thanks for all the great thoughts. Learning what true expression means is a journey for an old guy like me.
Loveless
Relentlessly, waves crash upon the rocks.
Where do you think sand comes from?
Castles; between your toes; in the bucket; in your eyes.
Uncompromisingly, storms assault the earth.
Where do you think rivers come from?
Rolling; restless; turbulent; churning.
Recklessly, fists bludgeon my soul.
Where do you think tears come from?
Painful; hurtful; cleansing; racking.
Furiously, heels thrash against my head.
Where do you think loveless comes from?
Solitary; crippling; dejected; alone.
Love.
Don't have it, don't want it, don't need it.
Waves; storms; fists; heels.
Beating me lovelessly.
Loveless
Relentlessly, waves crash upon the rocks.
Where do you think sand comes from?
Castles; between your toes; in the bucket; in your eyes.
Uncompromisingly, storms assault the earth.
Where do you think rivers come from?
Rolling; restless; turbulent; churning.
Recklessly, fists bludgeon my soul.
Where do you think tears come from?
Painful; hurtful; cleansing; racking.
Furiously, heels thrash against my head.
Where do you think loveless comes from?
Solitary; crippling; dejected; alone.
Love.
Don't have it, don't want it, don't need it.
Waves; storms; fists; heels.
Beating me lovelessly.