05-07-2013, 12:51 PM
Its super good if anything, I'd just have to say that the end of the second stanza took me a couple reads to get the flow right, but over-all I love it
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Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled - by thatguyfromacrossthestreet - 05-07-2013, 10:03 AM
RE: Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled - by albino-rino-5000 - 05-07-2013, 12:51 PM
RE: Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled - by Brownlie - 05-07-2013, 01:41 PM
RE: Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled - by billy - 05-08-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled - by thatguyfromacrossthestreet - 05-08-2013, 10:32 AM
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