Shadow o' Tarsis..
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Hi Cody, I am overwhelmed. Reading this through was a ponderous journey. I give you A for effort ;- nethered descensions, ever-last isceration? I recognize your potential for writing and suggest you
pull the good things out of this (forget the intent to impress). They are there, keep writing.
My best
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Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by Cody Phoenix - 05-06-2013, 03:16 PM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by tectak - 05-06-2013, 05:52 PM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by Cody Phoenix - 05-07-2013, 04:38 AM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by tectak - 05-07-2013, 06:01 AM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by Heartafire - 05-06-2013, 09:37 PM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by Heartafire - 05-07-2013, 06:09 AM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by Cody Phoenix - 05-07-2013, 06:18 AM
RE: Shadow o' Tarsis.. - by milo - 05-07-2013, 09:53 AM



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