05-06-2013, 06:38 PM
(05-06-2013, 09:54 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: The reason for the capitals on Crow, Hawk and Bird of Prey was to make seagulls inferior in the context of the poem, but perhaps it was a bit confusing.That's a smart stylistic choice. If you plan to re-work this poem, don't ditch that just because I was too ignorant to get it
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