Little Dancers

[Volaticus]

I think this is a fine poem, and the subject is described in an engaging way. If you put in a few more periods, I think it would read more easy. In line 3, I think it would fit better with the rest of the poem, if you replaced "there" with "here". Not saying I'm right, but to me that would connect the poem more to the narrator, and therefore connect me more to the poem.
I enjoyed the read, so thanks for sharing.