05-06-2013, 03:00 AM
I found this one interesting. Even more after reading some comments and then reading it again with new eyes. I perceived the 'Theys, and Theirs' to represent generally all other people, but very specific certain people at other times. Made me think about my experience and feel like the words were coming out of my head, kind of like POV poetry. Someone mentioned the ranting kind of style and the fact that it felt primitive but not simple, also. I feel that way about how my actual head works, so maybe that's why I got into this piece a lot.

