A dog next to the river
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I think this could work. The last line, especially.

But how does an angry dog's eye look? How do we know he's angry with the river?

At best the narrator could 'suppose' those things about the dog, but he'd have to do so on observations alone (unless he's more than a mere man).
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A dog next to the river - by Magpie - 05-05-2013, 04:20 PM
RE: A dog next to the river - by NakedBear - 05-05-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: A dog next to the river - by Magpie - 05-05-2013, 06:35 PM
RE: A dog next to the river - by Heartafire - 05-06-2013, 12:00 AM
RE: A dog next to the river - by Magpie - 05-06-2013, 12:23 AM
RE: A dog next to the river - by Volaticus - 05-06-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: A dog next to the river - by Magpie - 05-06-2013, 10:05 AM



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