The River of Lies

[knicodemus3]

billy,

thanks for the notes! which words weren't bringing you into the poem and what effect did they have on you? Which stanzas weren't as important to you? Did you become less focused during those stanzas or what about them didn't engage you?

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hey ambrosial,

thanks for the advice and the encouragement! what issues with the rhyme or rhythm did you have? which lines are you referring to?