Passing Clouds

[Pilgrim]

I like the style. Smoke of pipe brings clouds. Live life with gusto and not in hypochondriac state

Hello, bogeycadet.

Thank you for your comments.

This style of presentation is known as Cinquain. The lines of each stanza contain 2, 4, 6, 8, and 2 syllables respectively.

Regards,

Pilgrim.

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Hi Pilgrim,

The title completely mislead me, but I like being surprised, and the title fits just beautifully after I read through the first time.
I think it was narrated in a witty and refreshing way. I don't know what those 'pungent herbs' exactly are, but the wording lead my mind to images of an old man, in a coloury world, smoking herbs, watching clouds and time go by, while being content. No idea if that was your intent, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. Thanks for sharing

- LB

Hello, Volaticus.

Thank you for your comments.

‘Pungent herbs’ was just another way of saying ‘aromatic tobacco’.

Regards,

Pilgrim.