Kill Those That Came Before
#6
i liked it and thought the message was far from simple but very primitive. the rant style was excellent. the narrative in parts is weakened in places because of how it tells of everything being dead without giving the reader any reason or depth.
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Kill Those That Came Before - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 09:07 AM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by YaMarVa - 05-01-2013, 11:27 PM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by Volaticus - 05-02-2013, 06:41 AM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by Brownlie - 05-04-2013, 02:08 PM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by pepes.kitty - 05-04-2013, 02:35 PM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by billy - 05-04-2013, 06:37 PM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by Ehud - 05-05-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by rowens - 05-05-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: Kill Those That Came Before - by rowens - 05-06-2013, 05:29 AM



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