In Bed with Schizophrenia Edit 1 Rowens (both of them), true and I think billy
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I think it captures a schizophrenec's obsession with self but shows too much /awareness/ of self, if you know what I mean. Starting with the first line, "the madness never knows its mind", a schizo is not so aware of their own madness in that way. Pretty much, what I am saying, is this should be third person. It reads more like "this is what I would write if I were mad" from a sane person than the actual non-aware rants of the truly mad. IOW you can proselytize the mad but you cannot proselytize the madness. Yes, the first misspelling was deliberate, i lke the way it looks.

milo
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RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia - by Keith - 05-02-2013, 04:12 AM
RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia - by tectak - 05-02-2013, 05:08 AM
RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia - by trueenigma - 05-02-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia - by rowens - 05-03-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia - by tectak - 05-03-2013, 11:36 PM
RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia - by rowens - 05-03-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: In Bed with Schizophrenia Edit 1 Rowens (both of them), true and I think billy - by milo - 05-04-2013, 08:54 AM



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