White Darkness

[Volaticus]

To me it seems like you have put a lot of thought into this poem, but I don't really understand why the things that happen, happen, or what the 'message' really is. To me it seems more like half a poem, I would need some more descriptions to get drawn into it, and really feel the fear, darkness etc. and the impact is has on the 'you'. Sorry I can't be of better help right now.