On ruing the past
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I loved the mix of beautiful wording and morbid tones. It was easy to read, flowed nicely and the ending just made my day. Only one minor thing, and it really is minor, was that I noticed that L3 for me flew better without 'from'. But really, a refreshing poem, nicely done Smile
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On ruing the past - by Pilgrim - 05-03-2013, 07:29 PM
RE: On ruing the past - by Todd - 05-03-2013, 11:00 PM
RE: On ruing the past - by Pilgrim - 05-04-2013, 04:17 PM
RE: On ruing the past - by Magpie - 05-04-2013, 03:06 AM
RE: On ruing the past - by Volaticus - 05-04-2013, 08:39 AM



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