05-04-2013, 07:40 AM
I like the way you use the moon as the narrator's guest, if I'm not interpreting wrong. But the mentioning of her telling stories, makes me curious to hear more of those stories. But this is also fine little poem as it is now. I noticed you said 'The Moon' was a working title, so I just couldn't resist suggesting the title 'Luna'. But now I just got sidetracked
Anyways, thanks for sharing.
