On ruing the past

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On ruing the past

Magpie Offline

Metavariable loon, sir.

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05-04-2013, 03:06 AM

Hi Pilgrim,
I liked this poem very much, it flows perfectly and the last line is wickedly funny and demands the poem to be read again with a different perspective, which I have a done a few times now.
It is surprisingly different to your other poems. Thanks for the read.
Cheers.

wae aye man ye radgie

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On ruing the past - by Pilgrim - 05-03-2013, 07:29 PM

RE: On ruing the past - by Todd - 05-03-2013, 11:00 PM

RE: On ruing the past - by Pilgrim - 05-04-2013, 04:17 PM

RE: On ruing the past - by Magpie - 05-04-2013, 03:06 AM

RE: On ruing the past - by Volaticus - 05-04-2013, 08:39 AM

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