winter poem (for newsclippings and rowens)

[serge gurkski]

I don't know. I feel overwhelmed for some reason. I can't critique.

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Though I read it. It is nice to loft through.

Makes me want to drink too.

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to Newsclippings:

damn!
I almost missed your reply! I do not want to lead you into temptation. If you can do without alc, pls stay that way and save yourself

(I cannot )

I must fumble with the underbelly of this text.

cautious cheers!

serge


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Good afternoon Lewis,

I just started reading your critique, but in advance:

1. bourgeois is used because of : " un bourgeois tout petit petit (the movie:
http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Un_bourgeoi...etit_petit
(so Marx was close)
(to quote from wiki: "Forte et pessimiste dénonciation de la médiocrité."
It is also a tongue in cheek ref to
Buñuel's Le charme discret de la bourgeoise:
http://youtu.be/7Z50Gg_16H4


"Only, why does the lamp dim? ", you asked.

This a triple reference I might foot note. Most important is:

This poem by Belgian master stylist Émile Verhaeren:

" C'est la bonne heure où la lampe s'allume : ..."
(http://poesie.webnet.fr/lesgrandsclassiq...llume.html)

more later
cheers
serge