I'm just a dramatic teenager
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(04-26-2013, 01:17 PM)Tksweck Wrote:  Shut off and locked away
I feel it smashing on that door
Every now and then a bit will come out
Now reminded, I search for more
But it seems to be a resource
That appears can not be renewed
Unless once more, it knocks on that door
And I answer in a certain mood.
I like it. Title is perfect. I read the title and thought okay, some angsty poem from a kid, but there was thought behind this poem. Line 1 set it for me on my own personal level. The door I could imagine being my parents and me talking to them. Line 4/5 I feel like my parents are reminding me I can't do this, or that I have to do things this way, but I'm just a teenager, 18 and know everything. "A resource/ That appears cannot be renewed." It's like I'm learning, but not applying what I've learned. Until of course, none other than, my parents, knocking at my door... and I love the last line! "I answer in a certain mood." I love that. Perfect teenage angst... And it leads back to line 3 for me.
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I'm just a dramatic teenager - by Tksweck - 04-26-2013, 01:17 PM
RE: I'm just a dramatic teenager - by rowens - 04-28-2013, 04:10 AM
RE: I'm just a dramatic teenager - by Volaticus - 04-28-2013, 04:52 AM
RE: I'm just a dramatic teenager - by Zerric - 04-30-2013, 12:56 PM
RE: I'm just a dramatic teenager - by KICKBACK - 05-03-2013, 05:16 PM
RE: I'm just a dramatic teenager - by Brownlie - 05-04-2013, 02:26 PM



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