05-03-2013, 12:50 PM
I was trying to convey isolation and neglect. The Grecian columns rot in a silent forest, the posts rot beneath the pier. I see what you mean about absurdly convoluted metaphors-within-metaphors now
Thank you for your honest and insightful feedback, trueenigma
I take your point about subtlety.
Thank you for your honest and insightful feedback, trueenigma
I take your point about subtlety.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

