05-03-2013, 09:52 AM
Hi Heart,
I've read this on several occasions today, and hoping that something more constructive would come to me to be able to say to you. Sadly I have not thought of anything extra to say. I don't think that I am quite getting it and that may be more to do with me and my reading of it.
I like the imagery and also the phrasing in the second stanza.
Unlike rowens with "The Little Prince" I was reminded of a Woody Guthrie song but only because the song has the line "and the wheat fields rolling" in it, and I been singing that dam song in my head all day, but that's not your fault.
I look forward to reading it again if you are going to add to it, sorry I couldn't of been more help, I'm still new to this world of poetry and 'learning on the job' as it were.
Thanks.
I've read this on several occasions today, and hoping that something more constructive would come to me to be able to say to you. Sadly I have not thought of anything extra to say. I don't think that I am quite getting it and that may be more to do with me and my reading of it.
I like the imagery and also the phrasing in the second stanza.
Unlike rowens with "The Little Prince" I was reminded of a Woody Guthrie song but only because the song has the line "and the wheat fields rolling" in it, and I been singing that dam song in my head all day, but that's not your fault.
I look forward to reading it again if you are going to add to it, sorry I couldn't of been more help, I'm still new to this world of poetry and 'learning on the job' as it were.
Thanks.
wae aye man ye radgie