05-03-2013, 09:01 AM
This makes me think of the The Little Prince. I read it a few times, without thinking of that. I wanted more to it. Not to seem so pieced together. Then my personal associations took me to The Little Prince, because I've liked that book so long. That happens.
The sentiment is only mildly bleeding through. I just think it needs something more. Unless it's about The Little Prince.
I think a few more lines will open it up.
The sentiment is only mildly bleeding through. I just think it needs something more. Unless it's about The Little Prince.
I think a few more lines will open it up.