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05-02-2013, 09:45 AM

(05-02-2013, 08:48 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:
Eyes locked in battle,
Curiously confident,
Me and the Bird thief.

Love this gem! I would think I would love it more if you dropped thief.
Fine haiku!
best,
Heart

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Haiku - by Magpie - 05-02-2013, 08:48 AM

RE: Haiku - by Heartafire - 05-02-2013, 09:45 AM

RE: Haiku - by Magpie - 05-02-2013, 10:19 AM

RE: Haiku - by billy - 05-02-2013, 02:52 PM

RE: Haiku - by Magpie - 05-03-2013, 02:28 AM

RE: Haiku - by billy - 05-03-2013, 07:53 AM

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