Marmara memories

[tectak]

Maybe I need a line
breaker now? ;-)

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Good morning Tom. I did not get that remark by you: " maybe "with" instead of "of" as the hangover and heat are not interelated."
Because, to lay it out to you, when i am hung over I make no avoidable interrelationships with phenomena like light fro a sun unneccarily shining down upon my aching headiness,
not yet bathed in a sea of beers.

Can you explain your statement quoted above to your dumb German fellow poet (deinem deutschen Dichterkollegen), please?

Cheers and thank you encore une fois.

serge robert gurkski

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Sometimes your really masterful critiques are poems by themselves that I sometimes don't get but always enjoy.
Are you sure, you were not a poet in your pre-life life, too?

"...with a hangover in the stinging heat of a late afternoon"
It is not the hangover of stinging heat, but the afternoon of stinging heat.
That is all