Realisation
#6
me again. ;-)

let me add two remarks:

"supported by posts like Grecian columns "
here i stumble over "like".
What I read is: supported by Grecian urns (a Keats ref of course: http://www.eecs.harvard.edu/~keith/poems/urn.html)

"mocked their wooden objectivity"
I like this line a lot, because it is true. ;-)

Please, bin at will, but I as a reader don't need the "likes" in S2

And one final remark: I (because of the title of the poem) miss a reference to George Berkeley.

cheers
Serge
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Messages In This Thread
Realisation - by heslopian - 04-30-2013, 08:30 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 04-30-2013, 10:54 PM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-01-2013, 05:04 AM
RE: Realisation - by milo - 05-01-2013, 12:47 PM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-01-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-02-2013, 02:11 AM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-02-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-02-2013, 06:58 AM
RE: Realisation - by billy - 05-02-2013, 03:56 PM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-03-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-03-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-04-2013, 09:41 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-05-2013, 01:10 AM



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