05-02-2013, 02:11 AM
me again. ;-)
let me add two remarks:
"supported by posts like Grecian columns "
here i stumble over "like".
What I read is: supported by Grecian urns (a Keats ref of course: http://www.eecs.harvard.edu/~keith/poems/urn.html)
"mocked their wooden objectivity"
I like this line a lot, because it is true. ;-)
Please, bin at will, but I as a reader don't need the "likes" in S2
And one final remark: I (because of the title of the poem) miss a reference to George Berkeley.
cheers
Serge
let me add two remarks:
"supported by posts like Grecian columns "
here i stumble over "like".
What I read is: supported by Grecian urns (a Keats ref of course: http://www.eecs.harvard.edu/~keith/poems/urn.html)
"mocked their wooden objectivity"
I like this line a lot, because it is true. ;-)
Please, bin at will, but I as a reader don't need the "likes" in S2
And one final remark: I (because of the title of the poem) miss a reference to George Berkeley.
cheers
Serge
