05-01-2013, 11:27 PM
I think the message here is very simple; which can either be a good or bad thing. Generally, I think it'll be very effective though.
Not sure if I agree with the statements in the poem though, example; "They are dead, their work is dead.", because a unique characteristic of humanity is our ability to pass on knowledge and understanding, mimicry has been used to escalate many great thinkers and artist.
When I disagree with a poem's message, which is a common part of reading poetry, I hope to savor in the choice of words, rhythm of phrases, or unique perspectives. Unfortunately I did not find these much in this one.
Being you are a trained poet in verse and method, It was enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing.
Not sure if I agree with the statements in the poem though, example; "They are dead, their work is dead.", because a unique characteristic of humanity is our ability to pass on knowledge and understanding, mimicry has been used to escalate many great thinkers and artist.
When I disagree with a poem's message, which is a common part of reading poetry, I hope to savor in the choice of words, rhythm of phrases, or unique perspectives. Unfortunately I did not find these much in this one.
Being you are a trained poet in verse and method, It was enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing.