05-01-2013, 10:13 AM
Hi BrotherKaramazov, great name by the way. Thank you for this read, your first offering on the site I see. You use the language very well and your images are well constructed and vivid in their effect.
I kind of agree that it doesn't really lead to anywhere or perhaps I'm missing something somewhere, but I have read it three times now, the first was a bit of a whirlwind where I got lost in the wonderfully descriptive images, but it is making more sense even as I read it again now.
Cheers, I look forward to your next poem.
I kind of agree that it doesn't really lead to anywhere or perhaps I'm missing something somewhere, but I have read it three times now, the first was a bit of a whirlwind where I got lost in the wonderfully descriptive images, but it is making more sense even as I read it again now.
Cheers, I look forward to your next poem.
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