a quiet coronation

a quiet coronation

rowens
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05-01-2013, 05:24 AM

On one hand, it feels a bit over-written. But then I kind of like the centipede feeling of it that makes up for that. I think it fits the subject. In situations like this, I usually ask the person to post another poem soon, so I can get a deeper perspective.

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a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 04:23 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:10 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:13 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:17 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:20 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:24 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:34 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by Magpie - 05-01-2013, 10:13 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 10:23 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by Volaticus - 05-02-2013, 07:27 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-22-2013, 07:46 AM

RE: a quiet coronation - by serge gurkski - 05-22-2013, 09:43 AM

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