a quiet coronation
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haha, well thank you! I'm not sure how to apply your criticism, but i really appreciate the read! Perhaps the best criticism that i can take from you is "maybe this thing isn't finished"... is that about right? I can take that.

thanks,
Corey

also let me know how subsequent reads go Wink
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a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 04:23 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:17 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:20 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:24 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:34 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by Magpie - 05-01-2013, 10:13 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by Volaticus - 05-02-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-22-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by serge gurkski - 05-22-2013, 09:43 AM



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