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a quiet coronation
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05-01-2013, 05:10 AM
This poem seems to be going in all the right directions without getting anywhere. At one and the same time, it feels like it needs to be trimmed and added to. There's nothing really wrong with it, I like the way it thinly scales down the side of the page. Something feels too stiff about it. But I almost like it.
And I might like it if I read it a few more times. Let me see. |
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a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 04:23 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:17 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:20 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by rowens - 05-01-2013, 05:24 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 05:34 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by Magpie - 05-01-2013, 10:13 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by Volaticus - 05-02-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-22-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: a quiet coronation - by serge gurkski - 05-22-2013, 09:43 AM
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