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Realisation
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05-01-2013, 05:04 AM
I actually meant the light of the sun in L5, and though I see your point about a full stop after L4, L1 - 7 are all one sentence. I'll see if I can make those lines more concise. Thank you for your kind and honest feedback, serge
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Realisation - by heslopian - 04-30-2013, 08:30 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 04-30-2013, 10:54 PM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-01-2013, 05:04 AM
RE: Realisation - by milo - 05-01-2013, 12:47 PM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-01-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-02-2013, 02:11 AM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-02-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-02-2013, 06:58 AM
RE: Realisation - by billy - 05-02-2013, 03:56 PM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-03-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Realisation - by heslopian - 05-03-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: Realisation - by serge gurkski - 05-04-2013, 09:41 PM
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