05-01-2013, 05:04 AM
I actually meant the light of the sun in L5, and though I see your point about a full stop after L4, L1 - 7 are all one sentence. I'll see if I can make those lines more concise. Thank you for your kind and honest feedback, serge
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

