04-30-2013, 05:13 AM
rowens this doesn't feel like rap to me either. I haven't had time to crit but I love everything you've been posting lately. very raw. I love your style. you really capture things in a poignant and gut wrenching way. sometimes I try to tell stories in poetry too, but you're much more successful than I am ;p
anyway, loved this, have no useful crits for you other than well-deserved praise. thanks for sharing.
anyway, loved this, have no useful crits for you other than well-deserved praise. thanks for sharing.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.