04-29-2013, 10:22 PM
Though your poems sometimes seem a little disconnected, in direction; they're really not disconnected. Your mind digs and smooths out its own time and space groove, and your sequences run on that plane.
And it's accurate. The thinking and the action and the speech. How it flows and comes together. No need to invent sequencing links after the fact, that weren't there in fact.
If people have any sense, they'll be able to follow. And they can learn to appreciate what's there, and swallow it whole without obsessing over imaginary links that they foolishly allowed themselves to learn existed, but simply distract from the point.
And it's accurate. The thinking and the action and the speech. How it flows and comes together. No need to invent sequencing links after the fact, that weren't there in fact.
If people have any sense, they'll be able to follow. And they can learn to appreciate what's there, and swallow it whole without obsessing over imaginary links that they foolishly allowed themselves to learn existed, but simply distract from the point.