04-29-2013, 09:33 PM
Thanks for the good advice, just what I was looking for. I am attempting poetry for the first time to help my writing in other ventures. I have no previous knowledge of poetic form or method; beyond reading poetry through life. So any help is useful.
Sooth is to find truth, I am trying to find “truth” in the “morning darkness” hours previous to dawn, before I make my day. Mornings are silent and calming. Because my days are like death, "eternal to the grave" (forever I’ll be dead once I start my day), I take time in the morning for reverence and solace.
Maybe I should re-work these lines?
Led would be correct, thanks.
Not sure why I picked my coma use, just what felt right. After re-reading I agree and will re-consider their placements.
Sooth is to find truth, I am trying to find “truth” in the “morning darkness” hours previous to dawn, before I make my day. Mornings are silent and calming. Because my days are like death, "eternal to the grave" (forever I’ll be dead once I start my day), I take time in the morning for reverence and solace.
Maybe I should re-work these lines?
Led would be correct, thanks.
Not sure why I picked my coma use, just what felt right. After re-reading I agree and will re-consider their placements.