04-29-2013, 12:05 PM
This is quite a surreal and intriguing poem. I'm not sure the first line makes sense, but overall this is a poem worthy of the actual critique forums, I'd say. It reminds me a bit of Richard Brautigan in its stripped down style and abstract content. Thanks for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe