04-28-2013, 12:20 AM
(04-27-2013, 10:42 AM)casey Wrote: Was searching hard, Who?Just some small thoughts.
for something ,didnt exist Comma in the wrong place. Didn't with an apostrophe. Who/What didn't exist?
for a thing without a clue
If only I knew
all the trust I put
it wasnt even true wasn't
Walked the road
which lead to nothing new
If only I knew
No tree, no leaves
Dead end is all I could feel
Maybe destiny is trying to show u I think it would work better with "you". But I think that's a matter of opinion
If only, u knew
I think the idea is nice, it just needs a little more editing, and some periods wouldn't hurt either. Thanks for the read

