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if only I knew
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04-27-2013, 08:54 PM
(04-27-2013, 08:21 PM)casey Wrote: SorryMuch easier to read now, whereas before it was more like a text message and I'm not too good at deciphering them. Needs a little work on the metre and rhyme but the idea is good with the twist in the last line. Sorry I was a bit cheeky in my first post to you, but it was 3:21am.  wae aye man ye radgie |
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if only I knew - by casey - 04-27-2013, 10:42 AM
RE: if only I knew - by AlexSharp - 04-27-2013, 10:48 AM
RE: if only I knew - by Magpie - 04-27-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: if only I knew - by casey - 04-27-2013, 08:21 PM
RE: if only I knew - by Magpie - 04-27-2013, 08:54 PM
RE: if only I knew - by Volaticus - 04-28-2013, 12:20 AM
RE: if only I knew - by casey - 04-28-2013, 02:36 AM
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