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Beneath the Surface

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04-27-2013, 10:39 AM

Very emotional, I can feel the what you're trying to convey. Might I recommend adding some figures of speech just to make it a little more creative?

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Beneath the Surface - by Glittercake - 04-26-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: Beneath the Surface - by shemthepenman - 04-26-2013, 05:04 AM

RE: Beneath the Surface - by Volaticus - 04-26-2013, 08:45 AM

RE: Beneath the Surface - by AlexSharp - 04-27-2013, 10:39 AM

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