04-27-2013, 06:18 AM
Sooth these halls of darkness morning
Sooth or soothe?
Before I make my day.
Tremble forward to the casket
Eternal to the grave.
What do you mean by Eternal here? Anything specific?
In sheep lead life I brim and tide
lead or led?
Not sought for never hiding,
The commas are in some places, but not in others.
All is all as I dash to dust,
My soul is no more binding.
Sooth or soothe?
Before I make my day.
Tremble forward to the casket
Eternal to the grave.
What do you mean by Eternal here? Anything specific?
In sheep lead life I brim and tide
lead or led?
Not sought for never hiding,
The commas are in some places, but not in others.
All is all as I dash to dust,
My soul is no more binding.