Brain Wash
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I know what hierarchical means and if you look for the meaning in the poem it makes sense. Perhaps specifically it's not the best word, but the definition works. Also, in poetry you don't have to have correct punctuation everywhere.

And I figured by at least naming the poem what I did you'd be able to make out what it means. Mind control of the masses, putting people in submission to a ruler's power...

I know the incorrect punctuation everywhere is annoying and I'll fix that, but I just thought that I had some creative liscence to do what I did.
"We write to make sense of it all."     -W. Stegner

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Brain Wash - by eli - 04-26-2013, 10:37 AM
RE: Brain Wash - by tectak - 04-26-2013, 03:21 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by eli - 04-26-2013, 05:14 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by tectak - 04-26-2013, 05:36 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by milo - 04-26-2013, 06:22 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by rowens - 04-29-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: Brain Wash - by crow - 04-25-2014, 05:49 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by RSaba - 04-26-2014, 03:49 AM
RE: Brain Wash - by crow - 04-26-2014, 09:32 AM
RE: Brain Wash - by RSaba - 04-26-2014, 01:29 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by AnywherebutHere - 04-27-2014, 04:33 PM
RE: Brain Wash - by Caleb Murdock - 04-30-2014, 09:00 PM



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