04-26-2013, 01:31 AM
(04-26-2013, 12:04 AM)rowens Wrote: I prefer goddesses too. But they all become women when you touch them anyway. And stay that way.Hi rowens, thank you for reading and your opinion. I guess this reads as a pompous piece of crap. Reading again, following your comments, I feel that undertone in this though it was unintentional. It is just a poem with no deep message to convey. It is actually an embellishment of an encounter with a friend from the past. I like your honest and straightforward way, I admire it. Thank you again for commenting.
Of the two times I mentioned The Catcher in the Rye in poems or songs, one also mentioned The Bell Jar.
Girls are afraid of me, because they say I make them believe in fairy tales. That's why I can't relate to these poems, and most poems. That's why I never lived with any of these women. They sometimes say they want to be goddesses, but it's harder than it looks. And I don't know anything about academic attitudes.
That's how I read things. I can't relate, because for me dreams aren't faded, but blinding. But I can see your character here with his amused academic expressions. Don't even have to be academic to make those expressions.
And I can see all the women that loved them, looking down on me because of something bad I said about coffee.
This poem made me think that stuff. Sorry about that.
my best,
Heart

