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04-25-2013, 04:19 PM

I have this underlying need to change "come" to "came" in this poem.

It is brief. Makes me wonder what you were choosing between.

I'll be there in a minute.

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[During, not after] - by Buck - 04-25-2013, 10:11 AM

RE: [During, not after] - by newsclippings - 04-25-2013, 04:19 PM

RE: [During, not after] - by eli - 04-26-2013, 10:27 AM

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