04-25-2013, 06:52 AM
The Cherries of D.C.
Brown trees stand,
loaded springs,
anxiously anticipating
one moment of
climatic perfection:
A lovely image. I find the first two lines the weakest, lacking the beauty that follows. This here:
hidden pink unveiled
in a flare of petals
breathtaking!
Brown trees stand,
loaded springs,
anxiously anticipating
one moment of
climatic perfection:
A lovely image. I find the first two lines the weakest, lacking the beauty that follows. This here:
hidden pink unveiled
in a flare of petals
breathtaking!