04-24-2013, 10:04 PM
I appreciate what your saying Rowens and you are correct I could make a poem from any of those lines that look like titles. To be perfectly honest I wrote this poem about 10 years ago. I posted a poem yesterday which as yet has still not been commented on so this was my kind of friendly spanner in the works.
At the time my thinking, was to base a poem on sounds. Also I had heard of a Buddhist meditation that involves listening very intently to each individual sound that you can hear at a given moment in time, it sounds easy but you'd be surprised what's floating around in the air.
So although what I wrote does seem like a lot of random scenes thrown together,they were actually all the noises that I could hear. Is it a bad concept for a poem, or is it an interesting concept explained in a bad way?
At the time my thinking, was to base a poem on sounds. Also I had heard of a Buddhist meditation that involves listening very intently to each individual sound that you can hear at a given moment in time, it sounds easy but you'd be surprised what's floating around in the air.
So although what I wrote does seem like a lot of random scenes thrown together,they were actually all the noises that I could hear. Is it a bad concept for a poem, or is it an interesting concept explained in a bad way?
wae aye man ye radgie