Nike and Boredom
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I think there's a lot of tension here between a stiff, old way of writing and talking, and a kind-of-the-way of writing and talking-now-in-the-subject.

What that means is, the lines are very stressful, and that adds to the message. Stressful, like laborious, but not necessarily in a bad way.

It works well in a way. But I don't know how well.
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Nike and Boredom - by lewis taylor - 04-24-2013, 07:49 PM
RE: Nike and Boredom - by rowens - 04-24-2013, 09:41 PM
RE: Nike and Boredom - by tectak - 04-24-2013, 10:14 PM
RE: Nike and Boredom - by lewis taylor - 04-26-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: Nike and Boredom - by tectak - 04-26-2013, 05:03 PM



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