Dear Mr. Prime Minister
#3
We are born in a world where materialistic items,
are.
more.

Are these periods because these ideas are so serious?

important,
then poverty and hunger.

then or than. More important, then poverty. Or more important than poverty. Either could work, though maybe not. It depends on your mind.



Our lives revolve around businesses,
and money that only exists on computers.
Corruption.

I think money's corrupt even when it's being used for good things. So these lines are fair.

Where do I begin?
Our children go to school to learn about jobs,
that don't even
exist.
Higher Education?
Impossible.
Raise tuition fees so our young adults,
go into more
dept.


Do you mean debt, or department? The idea of going into more departments sounds like a fate worse than debt.

But that's okay, right Mr. Prime Minister?
It's all a big circle of failure.
Isn't it?
I'm sorry to say sir,
but we hit the peak.
The peak of oil,
the peak of population,
the peak of jobs.
It's all going to tumble down.
When the lights go off we will know,
we will know that 'our way of living',
is all just one
big.
lie.
But that's okay,
Right, Mr. Prime Minister?


I figure all the leaders are meant to do the things that people don't like. That's why people vote for them. The obvious stuff is hinted at in this poem. Could be more.
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Messages In This Thread
Dear Mr. Prime Minister - by DestWrites - 04-24-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: Dear Mr. Prime Minister - by Magpie - 04-24-2013, 08:58 PM
RE: Dear Mr. Prime Minister - by rowens - 04-24-2013, 09:22 PM
RE: Dear Mr. Prime Minister - by DestWrites - 04-25-2013, 07:43 AM



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