On JR Hartley

[tectak]

To write in metered foot and verse:
To cast a perfect fly mid streamNo cap on this line. Only full stop needs capital following. Pedantic pollyIn fact, nice as this flows I am not sure about the full colon at all. Think maybe comma end line 1 so keeping the all the fish in one net.
and with a tug of line coerce;Oh, nice billy. Very nice indeed
to write in metered foot and verse,
in which the reader could immerse"The" reader singular, "themselves" plural.Make it "readers" for ease.
themselves and live. The poet's dream
to write. In metered foot and verse,
to cast a perfect fly mid stream

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wasn't sure about perfect being iambic, i pray it is changed can to could. in a small edit

This is refreshingly clear. It sparkles.
Best,
tectak