The Cherries of D.C.
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hello, I suggest these word changes simply because it would remove the anthropomorphism. It is much better to reverse the metaphor (that is, to make man a tree and not a tree a man). A tree doesn't 'anxiously anticipate' anything, people do. The trick may be not to show how the process of non-human nature relates to me but how I relate to non-human nature. That is, I do not find anything 'new' in thinking emotions in objects, but I may find something new within my own experience if I am able to be literal about the world around me. or something like that.
Personally, I would alter the words to, "until that" or something equally 'unwordy'.
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The Cherries of D.C. - by Buck - 04-24-2013, 05:26 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by shemthepenman - 04-24-2013, 05:54 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by Buck - 04-24-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by shemthepenman - 04-24-2013, 06:58 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by Buck - 04-24-2013, 07:05 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by heslopian - 04-24-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by Buck - 04-24-2013, 10:50 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by Heartafire - 04-25-2013, 06:52 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by Buck - 04-25-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: The Cherries of D.C. - by Volaticus - 04-26-2013, 08:01 AM



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