The Cherries of D.C.

[Buck]

Hello, the title seems ok.

The first two lines are great. but the rest is a bit empty and cliche. Also, anthropomorphism just seems a bit lazy. If you want to persist with this one, I would suggest three word changes: anxiously, anticipating and clima... oh, I read climactic I swear I am going fucking word blind.

Thank you for your comment. I agree that some of it seems cliché, but that's why I was hoping for some suggestions in giving the subject some more depth! And yes, you're not the only one to have read this and confused climatic with climactic. Why do you suggest those word changes: "anxiously anticipating"?