Literay Legacy

[Todd]

You can never escape you can only move south down the coast. I tried making that one into a sonnet. One of my favorites.

Hey True, I appreciate the thought here, but can you give a bit more in Serious Critique? It doesn't have to be line by line, but this is a bit too brief of a comment. If you'd already done a more extensive critique it would be fine for some of the give and take that goes on later in a thread.

Thanks