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Society
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04-23-2013, 03:46 PM
I think your poem is too wordy. You are rhyming words that dont go together and sound forced... Also not enough concrete imagery.... I am not sure what you want me to feel when you say purple or blue... these words are subjective and can mean many different things to many different people.
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Society - by LeKoda - 04-23-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: Society - by allykat727 - 04-23-2013, 01:29 PM
RE: Society - by philoinlove - 04-23-2013, 03:46 PM
RE: Society - by Volaticus - 04-24-2013, 06:10 AM
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