Can I Be This Leaf Which Falls To Me?

[tectak]

Hi eli,
Your "other" poem is in novice where you will get the right kind of advice.
Best,
tectak

What do you mean? Are you not able to critique poems in the novice section? I only posted it there because it was my first post on the site.

I can but choose not to on a regular basis. I am way to grumpy
Best,
tectak